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This essay topic was seen in a recent IELTS test in the UK. Some believe that young people under 18 who commit a crime should receive education rather than punishment. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Sample Band 8 Essay Some people believe that young offenders under 18 should be educated rather than punished, and I completely agree with this view. While crimes committed by young people should not be ignored, focusing on education and rehabilitation is far more effective than harsh punishment. Firstly, young people are still in the process of developing their understanding of right and wrong. Many of them commit crimes due to poor judgment, peer pressure, or difficult circumstances, such as growing up in unstable homes. Punishing them… Read More »IELTS essay, topic: Young people who commit a crime should receive education rather than punishment (agree/disagree)